The following story was an entry on  It was the first writing for young adults I completed on the weekly writing challenge and I WON!

Just a side-note:  Caleb is name chosen by the author, not me.  I'm not a fan and would like to change the name to Christopher because for some reason that is better for me, but - this was an entry in progress.

Cresta McGowan, Eve


            The horse walked with an uneasy gait carrying all three of us.  Arden hugged close behind Caleb leaving me to undulate on the horses’ ass; a sobering thought seeing how that is the very impression I had of Caleb upon meeting him.  He was so smug and confident the way he just assumed we were helpless without him.  It pained me to realize he was right.  He sat strong and tall in the saddle, as if he’d won some sort of battle.  The rabbits swung from the neck of his horse and storm clouds loomed overhead threatening our every step.
            I hated my lack of survival savvy. There was nothing in the pages of Fitzgerald that had prepared me for this except knowing when to duck if my “Gatsby” had one too many.  I shuddered at the thought of feeling like Daisy, dimwitted and dependent on a man, taking help from the proverbial knight on a horse.  Mine just didn’t carry a sword, nor was he as debonair as I’d read him to be.
            The wind died down and the sunflowers returned to their upright bloom, but that did not stop the rain from falling out of the sky.  Caleb picked up the pace to a canter and shouted a half-hearted, “Hang on back there!”  When we arrived on the edge of his settlement, my fears of his earlier prowess were somewhat assuaged.  He had not lied.  A deer hung stretched from a tree, and a boar was posted on a makeshift roasting spit.  Caleb swung down from the horse in one graceful motion and extended his hand to Arden.  Arden grabbed for him quickly and he lifted her gently to the ground.
            “Thank you,” she said and her face filled with a rosy flirtation.
            “Oh, please,” I muttered and Caleb and Arden looked at me.  He extended his hand in my direction, but I brushed it away.  I could get off a horse by myself, that much I knew.  Yet, as soon as I slid off the back of the beast, it lunged forward leaving me sitting in a fresh puddle of mud from the rain shower.
            “You really do have trouble with a helping hand, don’t you?” his hand extended once again.  Begrudgingly I took it this time, but not without damage to my pride.
            His camp was small but clean and it was obvious he’d hidden here successfully for a while now.  In one pull of his palm on a lingering rope, pulley’s and twine began to jut from the braches revealing a crude house.  The surface was rough but sturdy and he clamped each corner down to the ground giving it shape and life.  Windows were cut high to let in bits of the morning sunlight and traps extended from the bend to catch small prey.  I had to admit, his habit of impressing was hard to ignore, but he didn’t need to know that, not yet.
            Arden gushed over his ingenuity like she’d never heard of such great accomplishments.  We both had read how Huck Finn and Jim survived the trek down the Mississippi, and even if only in books and stories, men were told as skillful creatures.  I never quite understood in the pages of books why men were painted as such necessary beings when we were supposed to loathe them, fear them in real life.  I wanted to ask my teachers, but I knew this type of question would result in a thrashing.  Caleb continued setting up the home he’d made for himself, now shared with us.  I supposed the confirmation of a man’s capability was somewhat fascinating, but I found myself still leery of him; trusting too easily could be one’s demise.  Skill of survival is certainly a worthy attribute, but man’s cruelty and manipulation often lay deep beneath the surface, like an itch you can’t scratch, but will go mad trying. 
            “Where did you learn to do all of this?” I asked interrupting Arden’s locked gaze.
            “You’d be surprised what you can get done, what you can learn, when your life’s on the line.”
            “I supposed that’s true.”
            “It is.”  I wanted to learn more about him, try to have faith in the goodness he showed.
            “Have you always been alone out here?”
            “No.”  His reply intimated that no more would be said about the subject.  I wanted to press him, ask questions about his former campmates, but his green eyes shifted from glistening grapes to a deep jilted jade.  The look made me wary, made me remember all we’d been taught about men and their malicious ways.
            Caleb moved back to his horse, clucking softly in his ear as he removed the rabbits from the neck.  He nuzzled the horses’ muzzle with great affection and love; two qualities I was quickly learning he was capable of.  The tree he tied him to held a worn path past its trunk.  I wondered where this path led and who traveled it, Caleb to leave or others to enter?  He gave the horse an apple and stroked his long mane with a loving hand.  I’d always found in life those that love animals, love others.  He may prove this to be true, too.
            Arden was sitting on a tree stump watching him work with his horse and appreciating his nimble fingers as he pulled the rabbits from the line, her eyes were lost in his muscular frame, jaw agape.  I was embarrassed for her.
            “Close your mouth,” I snapped and sat down next to her, but she stayed lost in her daydream.
            “Do you really think all those things they told us about men are true?  I mean, so far, he’s been nothing like what we learned in school.”  Caleb lifted the horses’ saddle and blanket now and I found myself sucked into Arden’s stupor.  His tattoo of the New American Crest glistened against his shoulder in a mix of water and sweat.
            “Close your mouth,” Arden said and rolled her eyes at me.  My jaw now snapped shut and I tried to get my wits about me.
            “So, what would you ladies like for dinner tonight?” he asked, “Rabbit, deer, boar?”  He pointed at each choice like we’d been invited to the King’s buffet.  My mouth watered at the thought of real meat.  It’d been days since Arden and I had a real meal. The world does provide, but berries do not last long.  My mind drifted back to the days of school where a real feast was laid out on tables before us, three times a day.  Roasted meats and steamed vegetables, fruits, salads, and sides all for our taking.  Life outside the compound had been harder than I anticipated and the wait for real nourishment had only fed the idea of starvation.  Arden was eyeing the deer, her mouth practically watering over its form.  She looked at me and started to speak.  I knew what she wanted, she was so transparent.  And I knew we could never, ever kill a deer.
            “Rabbit’s fine,” I said and stared Arden down until she created a full pout on her face.  “It’s the only animal we have a chance of returning to you someday.”  I didn’t want to be in his debt, I barely wanted to be in his camp.

Of Martyrs and Wise Men
Short Excerpt by Cresta McGowan

The boats beat back the waves of the Thames. Their wooden clinkers sliced through the sea led surreptitiously by a dragon’s head. The land stretched out ahead and boasted an ornate church, a treasure of gold and riches. Each man readied his shield and his sword, prepared to secure all from whomever lived upon this terrain. At landfall, their steps moved without caution toward the doors of the alcove nestled between stone pillars. The men poured into the church prepared to battle, and stopped to find it empty. Hollow.
            “Where are the great riches Asgeirr?” A demand, not a request.
            A sly smile covered the stained face of the Viking king, “You ask me of great riches, you doubt me?” His sword rested in his tanned hand the skin scarred from tumultuous years of victorious battle. He plodded through the stone parish; glared into the eyes of each man – he watched, judged, questioned - Do you doubt me? 
            “The treasure is here. Trust this. A Christian tradition besets you, one that has failed as no miracles will save this place; a fool’s folly. They believed buried bones of a saint could create magic for them. Protection. A martyr, their rescuer.”
            “That doesn’t explain the desolate of riches. You promised brass biscuits like Njoror’s. Gold, Asgeirr, gold,” he spat.
            Vexed by the simplicity of his men, yet temperate, Asgeirr replied with a shake of his head: “You stand upon it.”
            The shouts of the men coupled with the strident sound of a wooden chest shoved across an uneven cobble floor echoed off the walls. The trap door beneath the chest guarded the paragon against impatient grasps. The men clawed at the hatch, wrung it open with the impetus of desire to reveal gold and sliver, and to their surprise, the high priest masked betwixt the fortune. 
            Swords drawn by the Vikings the priest ascended from the depths. Asgeirr surveyed him; his eyes challenged him. 
            “Why are you alone here?"
            The priest remained calm, quiet, his fear absent. He did not shiver or cower, and his eyes held Asgeirr’s gaze with uncharacteristic determination. For the Northmen, fear motivated their blood draw, fear nurtured their rage.
            “What makes you assured?” Silence.
            With his sword tipped for entry at the dip in the priest’s neck, the holy man’s eyes lifted to the balustrade above them. A cold chill passed through Asgeirr’s spine as he followed his gaze and counted fifty arrows pinched and placed upon him; Asgeirr faltered.
            “Did you think we would not be ready? For Norse rapscallions? Attacks burrowed in unplanned, unorganized, childish pretenses. The nature of your people. Your ships sail with swiftness over the ocean’s waves and scar the sacred honor of Wessex with filth on our shores. You desecrate our lands. What, forever? No. You are finished. Your titanic wake tolerated no longer. We dedicate ourselves as men to tame the villainous nature of your people, to seek revenge for ours. You will thrive here no more.” Athelwulf, Noble of Wessex, allowed his words to sink deep into the haggard men below him. The raids upon Canterbury and London had created a trail of preparedness in the men of this place. Blood spilled over the green grass for far too long, and Athelwulf vowed to end this war.
            Asgeirr lowered his sword, “I have underestimated the men of Wessex. It seems your martyr is no fool. However, you will not defeat me. My men. We will still take this treasure, and the priest. We will return to our ships and conquer all in our path. We will not surrender to your darts.”
            “Balderdash! Ludicrous confidence comes before the fall. Outside the stone pillars, my army waits for my command. One arrow shot will set off a sea of disappointment for your kind. The arrogance of your men, taken in by falsies of wealth. Bite into the gold Asgeirr, you’ll find your teeth leave no marker.”

            Asgeirr, an honorable man, could not allow this victory by acquiescence. Peckish and resolute, he drew his hands through his ragged beard and glanced feverishly around the chamber proper, his eyes rested on each false statue of gold, on his men who now wavered in their conviction. Wise men predicted this prophecy, a martyr that would mend the English soul. Wise men are not to be doubted, and yet Asgeirr raised his sword.

He Plays Expert
by Cresta McGowan

The car door slams; I cringe...he's home. Each night his mood is worse and with the economy continuing its downward descent, the advertising business is an uphill climb. Few words are spoken upon entry; a quick brush past me and the girls, a stop at the fridge for his evening beer, and it's off to the basement "man cave" for a nightly round of Guitar Hero. We all wonder what tonight will bring: The Beatles, Greatest Hits, or for a particularly bad day, Metallica? As "off to never never land" wafts up the stairs, Metallica it is. 

    We are used to this.  For weeks he’s been on edge and we’re waiting for him to crack.  When he stumbles into bed around midnight with a smile on his face, I am intrigued.  There seems to be a twinkle in his eye and then the question comes, “Babe do we still have my guitar in the attic?”
    “Why?” I ask nervously.
    “I think I’ll call Kenny tomorrow and see what he’s been up to.”
And then it hits me like a train wreck – Kenny….guitar….college band….DOES – HE – REALLY – THINK – HE’S – GETTING – THAT – BACK – TOGETHER?  Kenny, a worthless excuse for a man, was his college garage band buddy.  They had dreams of taking it on the road, but as usual, Kenny bailed and it went up in flames like most of Kenny’s activities.  Wherever he goes, he leaves a trail of destruction behind him. I hear my husband snoring peacefully now and I know we are headed towards the fire.
    Before I feel like I’ve slept at all, the alarm is going off.  Much to my chagrin, my husband is up and out of bed early leaving a note on my pillow: My head is clear now.  Love you.  Thinking he’s let it go, only a momentary passing in the night, I am relieved.  But when he walks back through the door at 11:45a announcing, “I quit,” I literally visualize my house smoldering in a path of destruction.
    “Called Kenny this morning and he’s coming for dinner tonight to practice at 7p so set an extra plate.  He sounded weird on the phone, so please be nice.”
    Be nice – BE NICE!  I have to talk myself through it, “bite your tongue, this will pass, with Kenny it always does.”
    At 7p the door bell rings and I panic.  As I slowly open the door dreading what I will find on the other side I am astonished to see a woman and a 16-year-old Kenny standing in front of me.  She stares at me with a look of pure exhaustion and while I’m sure my face shouts utter confusion, I invite them in.
    My husband comes running up the stairs and stops hard mid-step.  A solemn feeling now takes over my home that completely replaces all frustration, anger, and trepidation I’d felt moments ago.  Through a tearful process we learn that Kenny Sr. left years ago.  He never overcame his obsession with becoming a “rock star” or the lifestyle that goes with it.  They haven’t seen him in five years and when my husband called early this morning, it was Kenny Jr. that made plans for tonight at 7p.  He thought that if he went into his father’s past, he might learn his father’s future.
    We stand in silence with the girls close by staring at their father through concerned eyes.  At 14 and 16, they are well aware of what is going on and hearing this story makes them wonder about their own dad; would he leave, too?
    And then, there it was, the smile I’d seen last night on my husband’s face.  He looked down at Kenny Jr. and asked one question, “Guitar Hero?  I play expert.”  The boys descended in to the “man-cave” where The Beatles rang up the stairs.
    After dinner and a night of seeing what really matters, my husband fell into bed still smiling.  It was not the sinister smile of the night before, but a satisfied smile I was glad to see.  He looked at me and said, “Kenny just doesn’t know what he’s missing,” and with that he was sound asleep.
    I, too, smile completely happy as well and totally exhausted from the 24-hour roller coaster we’ve been on.  All I can think is, lesson learned.

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